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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Newbie Gloves- A pair of *thumbless* gloves, providing *one's* hands basic protection from the elements.

Newbie Shoes- A generic and cheap pair of shoes with a slight sense of fashion *that* will surely fill *one's* *shoeless* peers with envy. While they are barely able to provide any protection, it certainly seems better than going barefoot.

Small Dagger- A dagger best described as versatile, small, and dull. While it may only do as much damage as scratching with *one's* nails, it sure is more intimidating.

Long Sword - *Although *described as better than the small dagger, it certainly isn't much of an endorsement.**this sword is considered to be a stepping stone on the path of a warrior.

Small Halberd- A *small* halberd that offers those who aren't yet proficient in using halberd a step in the right direction.

Training Sword- A wooden sword used for training *would-be* warriors. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this sword will *hopefully turn children into warriors.*

Battle Axe -A one sided axe designed to chop down opponents without a downside to *one's* stats.

Root Staff - A staff carved from the root of an old tree, this iconic weapon is considered the first real weapon *would-be* magicians should use. While powerful enough to seriously hurt, only a strong enough desire to kill could turn this weapon lethal.

Wooden Club - Primitive and still unchanged for thousands of years, the wooden club is unrivaled in *it's* ability to bash *skulls in*. *Although it is* the best way to *maximize* damage, one should take note of the the hefty *trade-off*.

*Blaze-Blade*(or Blaze Blade) - An enchanted sword of fire, the Blaze-blade offers its wielders a small chance to burn targets attacked by this sword.

Hatchet - *A Hatchet,* when put in the hands of a logger could be used to cut down trees,* but when put* into the hands of a warrior, this *Hatchet* could be used to make one the laughing stock of an entire army.
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Chain Boots - A pair of boots made from affordable iron chains, *these* chain boots provide basic protection without a costly penalty.

Chain Helmet - A helmet made from affordable iron chains, *this* chain helmet provides basic protection without a costly penalty.

Chain *Chest-plate* - A *plate-mail* made from affordable iron chains, *this* chain *chest-plate* provides basic protection without a costly penalty.

Rip rest of the chains

Padded *Chest-plate* - A *plate-mail* made *entirely* of leather, *it offers* decent protection without the heavy weight of metal.

Padded Leggings - A pair of leggings made of *entirely of *leather, *it offers* decent protection without the heavy weight of metal.

Padded Gloves/Wristband/Gauntlets - arun forgot these

Newbie Backpack - A newbie without a place to live can vouch *that* carrying a backpack is probably *a* key ingredient to survival. It ** also *doubles* as a fashionable accessory.

Falchion - *A curved sword that has the power of an axe but the speed of a sword*

Great Axe - A large and heavy axe designed to trade speed for extra damage. *It's* *aerodynamical* shape makes it an excellent choice to maximize damage for *it's* requirements.

Cape - A piece of cloth ** draped over the back, *which was* designed to separate civilians from fighters. Capes also provide a slight defensive bonus and shielding from the *elements*

Wooden Shield - A shield composed *of* wood, designed to give a small defensive boost and make use of a spare hand.

Large Buckler - A large wooden buckler reinforced with steel*, forming* a formidable item for defense.
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Training Wand - A wooden wand used for training *would-be* mages. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this wand will *hopefully turn children into powerful mages*

Longbow - A long but surprisingly light bow ** made from the bark of the Elder Tree, a rare tree that grows in the *northern-lands*, making it a pricey item for most new adventurers.

Training Broadsword - A wooden two handed broadsword used for training *would-be* warriors. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this broadsword will *hopefully make children become fearsome warriors.*

Training Bow - A wooden bow used for training *would-be* *archers*. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this bow will hopefully make expert marksmen out of children.

Training Axe - A wooden axe used for training *would-be* warriors. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this axe will *hopefully make children into warriors.*

Training Dagger - A wooden dagger used for training *would-be* warriors. Light, extremely cheap, and almost useless, this dagger will *hopefully make children into warriors.*

Cotton Shorts - A pair of shorts that *provides the same amount of protection, but a higher level of fashion than the newbie pants*

Sterling Blade - A sword of repute for being easy to craft for warriors. The *strong lightweight hilt is crafted from the carcass of Iboros."

Aquarius Blade - *An elemental* dagger capable of causing water based damage to attacked targets.

Small Spear - A *small, lightweight* spear used for keeping heavy defense at the expense of offensive damage.

Sharpened Axe - A *moderately* heavy axe used as a weapon of war. Consisting of two sharpened metal pieces attached to a reinforced piece of wood, this item maximizes cost for efficiency.

Bow of Thorns - An Earth *element* small bow prickled with thorns, fashioned out of the flexible but thorny rosewood *with a twine bowstring*

Imperialus *Plate-mail* - *An* armor based on ancient traditional warrior *plate-mail*,*which mixes* armor and cloth to form affordable, decorative, and protective armor.

Do for all Imperialus!!

Iron *Plate-mail* - An Iron *Plate-mail* providing protection by means of tempered metal, forged from iron ingots.
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Orb Wand - A wand consisting of an orb attached to a wand, *amplifying* the *wand's* magical damage.

Newbie Cape - A small cape *which provides* minimal protection. Great for withstanding the elements; if it doesn't get ruined first.

Brodic *Plate-Mail* - Crafted from the tough alloy brodium, the Brodic *Plate-mail* makes up for its heavy weight in superior armor protection.

Iron Shield - A shield made from ** affordable *iron ingots* the iron shield provides basic protection without a costly penalty.

Slender Shimmer - A slender blade made out of cheap metal. The sword's unique shape and length *allows for* maximum speed *which makes* up for the *metal's* shortcomings.

Orcius Sword - The Ocrius Sword is a traditional sword in the sense that it's a well balanced sword that takes the best attributes from many different swords and combines *them* into one.

Tharic Greatsword - The Tharic Greatsword is a two handed sword with a protective hilt. In order to keep the *sword's* weight balanced, the sword is only one sided and *is therefore* unable to maximize *it's* damage.

Abolitius *Great-sword* - A pricey two handed sword used for its *elaborate* looks to establish authority. The *great-sword* has been used historically for centuries.

Withering Shiv - An infamous two handed sword imported from distant lands. The sword may not be the most demanding or damaging, but *it's low requirements make it useful to many different classes.

Conflagrant Bow - The Conflagrant Bow of fire *is* *an* unique weapon crafted from rare *fire-spark* wood and tempered ** in fire *which* would burn any other wood.

Higharc Bow - A bow designed from two *semi-*circular interconnected flexible sticks, allowing the wielder to maximize pullback without having to be a specialized bow master.

Aquatic Staff - A staff carved from *the soaked wood of far away marshes*, the Aquatic Staff *is infused* with power of the water element.

Valient Wand - A sturdy wand *reinforced* with magical properties *resisting* both physical and magical strain. It's low requirements allow for many different classes to *utilize* it.

Fire Stave - A fire elemental stave with a slight *increase in* body in exchange for reduced stats in other areas.

riperino rest gets done 2morrow
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Stoic Mace - A heavy metal mace, ringed for extra impact damage. *Although it requires a strong body-centric wielder,it provides* extra damage in return.

Morningstar - A basic *mace* fitted with pointy spikes to cause bleeding and heavy physical
damage, with low requirements for many different classes.

Terramace - An enchanted mace** carrying the power of the Earth. The Earth element reinforces the mace*,* making it uniquely suited for *both* physical and magical combat.

Spiked Shield - A shield hardened with spikes designed to *not only support* the shield, *but also* damage attackers brave enough to strike such a shield.

Braced Shield - A *shield raised in 3 sections to dampen the effects of strikes, and to reduce it's burden on it's wielder*

Dyadaci - *A unique dagger made up of two inverted blades which* provide additional weight, providing more damage *in exchange of* additional requirements.

Small Shiv - *The smaller counterpart of* the infamous Withering Shiv. This lightweight blade is well suited for many different adventurers.

Razor Halberd - ********The Razor Halberd is based off ancient hunting spears*,by tying two blades together, one side being a *halberd* and the other side being a spear, it forms a very effective weapon.****

^^By far the worst one

Driftwood Bow - A bow composed of *separate* pieces of hardened*,* composite wood material sectioned together with spear-like weapons, making it both intimidating at short and long range*s*.

Bow of Prey - A fierce bow designed by a ** master hunter in tribute to the birds of prey in the sky.
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Fatebender - A legendary sword *which*, according to ancient lore, descended from the heavens as a gift from the Gods to the last champion, slayer of the strongest dragon to ever walk the earth. Unrivaled in overall power, it is widely considered the strongest weapon in existence. The wielder of this sword *is said to have* the ability to bend the fate of battles.

Scaled Spear - A spear forged underwater by a race of mermen, *it offers* both a fast and moderately strong balanced weapon.

Scaled Shield - A shield forged underwater by a race of mermen, *it offers* superior protection to the few strong enough to bear such a shield.

Scaled Mace - A mace forged underwater by a race of mermen, *it* trades extra damage for a large penalty to defense and speed. *it is made* for *one's* with enough heart to bear the burden of such a weapon.

Divine Bow - A bow carved from the bark of a rare*,* mystical tree*. The* divine bow offers enhanced speed and magical properties not seen *in* many other bows.

Scaled Helmet - *A trimmed version of the Scaled Helmet.*

Scaled Plate-male -*A trimmed version of the Scaled Plate-mail*

Scaled Gauntlets - *A trimmed version of the Scaled Gauntlets*

Scaled Leggings - *A trimmed version of the Scaled Leggings*

Scaled Boots - *A trimmed version of the Scaled Boots*

Cheap Dress Shirt - A cheap dress shirt made from cotton material used to provide an entry *into* the finer lifestyle.

Cheap Dress Pants - A cotton dress pants made from cheaper material used to provide an entry *into* the finer lifestyle.

Cheap Dress Shoes - A pair of leather dress shoes made from cheaper material used to provide an entry into the finer lifestyle.

Nice Dress Shirt - *A fashionable dress shirt which only the best dressed can wear*

Nice Dress Bottoms - *A fashionable dress pant which only the best dressed can wear*

Nice Dress Shoes- *A fashionable dress pair of shoes which only the best dressed can wear*
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
Crown of the King - The Crown of the King, forged *for* the king, passed down for centuries, *it* empowers the one true ruler of kingdoms.

Santa Gloves - A simple pair of decorative ** Gloves with no *beneficial advantages*.

Santa Boots - A simple pair of decorative ** Boots with no *beneficial advantages*.

Santa Hat - A simple decorative ** Hat with no *beneficial advantages*.

Santa Bottom - A simple decorative ** Bottom with no *beneficial advantages*.

Santa Jacket - A simple decorative ** Jacket with no *beneficial advantages*.

Iboro Dust - Dust collected from an Iboro, *it is* used as an ingredient in crafting.

School Jacket - A standard school jacket uniform worn by *highschool* and university students.

School Cap - A standard school cap uniform worn by *highschool* and university students.

School Bottoms - A standard school bottom uniform worn by *highschool* and university students.

School Shoes - A standard school shoes uniform worn by *highschool* and university students.

Haymaker - A spellbook containing a basic physical skill, *which enables you to create* a whirlwind of weakened strikes heavily reliant on luck.

Trinshield - A rectangular, unusually long shield with three hardened spines *on each side*

Crown Luentia - The Queen Hendo's most sough after part, the crown from the head of *one of the* most important type of *Hendo.*

Laurel Wreath - *The* laurel wreath, *a* fit for a champion. Made originally from leaves and branches, this item is worn by those who's *accomplishments* go above and beyond.
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Posted 123 Months Ago
Hero
Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 65
- For Newbie Gloves, thumb-less or thumbless is fine. There's no change that needs to be made there.
- For Newbie Shoes, shoe-less or shoeless is fine.
- Long sword description is fine but your description fits better.
- For Small Halberd: A small halberd... in using *a* halberd a step in the right direction.
- For training sword, would-be is right but you don't need to change the other part of the description. It is better to, though.
- Wooden Club: It's not "it's" it's "its". >_> It should be "bash skulls". "Although the weapon is best for maximizing damage, one should take note of the hefty tradeoff." - Tradeoff or trade-off are acceptable.
- For Blazeblade - There is no need for a hyphen since it is a name. It could be the most grammatically incorrect name and it would still constitute as being correct.
- For Hatchet - It does not need to be capitalized in the description.
- For Chain Chestplate - "Plate-mail" is incorrect as there is no hyphen. The name "Chest-plate" is incorrect. That doesn't need a hyphen either. The item should be renamed "Iron Chainmail".
- For Padded Armor - The armor does not use plates, so why "chest-plate" lol? The description should be: "An armor made entirely of leather. It offers decent protection without the heavy weight of metal."
- For Newbie Backpack: "that" is not needed. "It can also double back as a fashionable accessory."
- For Large Buckler, "A large wooden buckler reinforced with steel to form a formidable item *of* defense." Commas are not needed.
- "Northernlands" does not require a hyphen. Only a space.
- For Cotton Shorts - Cotton Shorts have more guard than Newbie Pants. So your description is kinda wrong. :/ "A pair of shorts that *offers* better protection in comparison to newbie pants."
- For Sterling Blade - Your description should either be "strong and lightweight" or "strong, lightweight".
For Sharpened Axe: You don't need 'moderately'... 'Slightly' is just fine.
- For Imperialus set: Platemail is correct, not plate-mail. :/
- Iron Platemail: Again... It's platemail not plate-mail. :/
- For Orb Wand - The only change needed is to change "staff" to "wand" in the description. :/

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TOO MANY ITEMS. WHEN WE GET PERMISSIONS TO EDIT DESCRIPTIONS THEN WE'LL WORRY ABOUT THE REST.
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Posted 122 Months Ago
Scammer
Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 120
I know hero, i just C+P the whole description and put any changes within the * *

BUMP 2 THE TOP
MAYBE WE SHOULD GET THE JOB
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