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Posted 123 Months Ago
Hero
Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 65
http://i.imgur.com/KQ1PoPJ.pngPosts: 65
C in "Cheap" should be in lowercase. :]
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"Its low requirements" is the right way.
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Soaked wood instead of soaked wood... right?
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Its instead of it's.
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Its instead of it's.
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It should be "made from affordable metal..." and not "made from the affordable metal..."
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For the brodic set, it says "crafted from the tough alloy brodium." I believe it should be "crafted from tough alloy brodium."
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"...keeping heavy defence." instead of "...keeping a heavy defence."
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"Making it a pricey item." instead of "Making it a pricey items."
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"Training would be magicians." instead of "Training would be warriors." - I believe.
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I think that's list